学校側から追加の情報などが必要な場合は、自分が必要とする希望の内容を明確に、かつ丁寧に伝え、誤解や読み手の印象を悪くすることがないようにしましょう。英語には敬語はありませんが面識が無い方に対して口語表現は良い印象を与えないので避けるようにしてください。
Hanako Yamada
7F Mitomi Bldg., 1-20-22 Ebisu
Shibuyaku Tokyo 150-0013
Japan
Oct. 28, 2022 ←手紙を書いた日付
↓相手の学校の住所
International Admission Office
AAA University
Student Center, Room 302
Seattle, WA 98106
U.S.A.
Dear Sir or Madam, ←担当者(名前が分かっている場合はMr. / Ms. xxx)
↓本文
Thank you for accepting me for your Environmental Studies starting from January 2008. I am looking forward to studying at your school very soon.
I am writing to request the student housing information. I looked for that information on your website, but I was unable to find it. I’m interested in staying at a dormitory on or near campus possibly with a roommate, so I would appreciate it if you could send me the housing application form and brochure to my mailing address above.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
↓自筆で署名
Hanako Yamada